My Scores for Assignment 1

Kali-
Misti makes her mark on her town in an artistic way. She loves to put graffiti on the plain old walls in the alleyways. It is one way that she stands out from others in town since most of them are to afraid to sneak around and paint on the walls.
Creativity- 9/10
Uniqueness- 9.5/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 9/10
Environment, background- 10/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 9/10 
Total:  46.5/50
Comments: This is a great entry! It was very creative, I never would have thought of this! You captured the point very well that she is unique. Great background, but I think your model  could have been in a bit more devious pose seeing as she just vandalized an alley wall. But great job!


Crgee-
Anisa and her ordinary, popular sister, Claire always get into fights on how "un-natural" and "weird" Anisa is because of her personality and looks. But after the day is over, Claire comes to Anisa's favorite place to forget the day- the beach. Anisa just gets a good laugh looking at Claire dressed in her silky PJ's. The sisters hug and go back home- only to start the day over again....

Creativity- 7/10
Uniqueness- 6.5/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 9/10
Environment, background- 7.5/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 8/10 
Total: 38/50 
Comments:  This assignment was okay for me, but I think you could have done a bit better. I love the outfits, it makes it very clear that Anisa stands out. The environment was pretty but they were just standing there. I think they could have done a bit more interesting poses. And the story was really cute. : D Overall, pretty good. 

 Claire

Pattyn really enjoys going to the beach and her favorite thing to do there is STAND OUT!! She made most of her friends this way and more are still coming. Its her most favorite thing to do, make friends, because during her childhood she didn't have many.

Creativity- 8.5/10
Uniqueness- 7.5/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 9/10
Environment, background- 8/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 8/10 
Total:  41/50
Comments: I like the effect you used to make her really stand out. The clothes were really bright and stand-out-ish and that was great, but I think you could have made the picture a bit more interesting like by adding other sims, or a cool pose, but all-around great job.


Runner



Sasha was born in the mid eighteen hundreds, in the rural town of Riverview, when mythical beings were persecuted and killed for their existence.
Her parents, Opal and Chester, had been hiding their fangs and eyes for years, and they even adapted to human food and meat. When Opal gave birth, the two swore to hide their daughter in secrecy for her new rage to kill, along with her unexpected below freezing body temperature turning her purple.
They taught her skills in their basement, where she was safe and happy.
Now as Chester was actually a human, Sasha was able to grow to the age of seventeen, the year when most half breeds stop aging.
However, when the two went out to milk the cows and do other humanly tasks, Sasha had a raging urge to kill and ran outside, killing a villager.
Other townspeople spotted the scene and ran to report to the king. Her parents told her to run. To run to Sunset Valley, where people of all sorts were accepted without persecution. Sasha obeyed and despite her burning rage to kill, ran miles and miles to Sunset Valley.
Now, years and years later, she must cover her tracks and hide her face as she sneaks back to Riverview to bring her parents with her. Sasha is not, and never will be, accepted by her home town for her uniqueness.  




Creativity- 9/10
Uniqueness- 8/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 10/10
Environment, background- 8/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 9/10 
Total: 44/50 
Comments: Wow, that story is epic! I love the position and facial expression on Sasha! She really looks scared! Although, the background sort of looks like Kali's, didn't deduct points for that or anything, just saying. You made it very clear that she isn't accepted in Riverview. Great job! Although, if she's so cold, why doesn't she just put on some longer pants? :P


Kat


Blue loves to be herself, she doesn't excersise, she swings.  
Creativity- 7/10
Uniqueness-  7/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 8/10
Environment, background- 8/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 7/10 
Total:  37/50 
Comments: I like the idea of her swinging, it clearly says that she is accepted. But in the background we can see that there are walls halfway so I had to deduct points for that. I love how she is all smiley on the swings showing she can be accepted, that was great. Overall, pretty good. 


Claira






Creativity- 8/10
Uniqueness- 10/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 5/10
Environment, background- 7/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 7/10 
Total: 37/50
Comments: This was pretty creative. But I couldn't see your model very well at all so I deducted points for that. The environment was well put together but all the bright blue was distracting. It was unique and I never would have thought of it, but your model needs to be the main focus, not the trees.


Abi

Arainia hometown is twinbrooke where weirdness is not
welcome, the locals frown, gossip and panic when she's around them. But Arainia doesn't care.



Creativity- 8/10
Uniqueness- 8/10
Model (Hair, Clothes)- 9.5/10
Environment, background- 8.5/10
Did you capture the point of the assignment?- 9/10 
Total: 43/50
Comments: Wow, I love this! I never would have thought of that, and you can clearly see the difference between Arainia and the locals. Although I think you could have done a bit more interesting pose, this was really well done.  I know this is really random and off topic, where did you get the dress of the girl in the back with the honey-coloured hair?


Kay, if the other 4 people don't turn in their assignments tomorrow, I will post the scores and a new assignment. Nobody will be eliminated because of them.




Soooo Please post your scores below in a comment as soon as you can! Happy uh, scoring!




-Gymmie <3